Based on the draft and the comments from professor Martin gave me, I did more effort on the order within the five parts of video. And also the videos themselves. I selected it to kind of follow the basic rule, which is, stable, moving in sequence. I felt like that order is able to offer people more sense of different perspectives. The length of every videos are also follow some rule, like, 10 seconds, 20 seconds, 10 seconds….in sequence, basically, not quite strictly, to give people different break down.
Plus, I used the original water soundtrack instead of music soundtrack. Therefore, all kinds of different water soundtrack brings varieties and it is very enjoyable.
Also I worked on transitions between the shots to make the series of shoots move more naturally and soft.